In an effort to make Throwback Thursday — #tbt — about writing, because when this blog first began it was all about writing, here’s a post that was written in 2008.
Writing what I observe around me is a pre-writing exercise for me. It’s the beginning of story.
The Faces of Love…
One of my favorite walks is along a piece of the Waterfront Trail of Lake Ontario. I never tire of looking at the water — seeing the wave action, marking the horizon. It’s a thing of wonder and beauty to me and washes me with no small measure of peace.
On this particular early evening, Mr. G, honey and I are taking one of our rambles along the water. It is an unusually balmy spring day for April, and we are not the only ones taking the air. As we stroll along and I watch the activity around me, I realize that what I am seeing is the many and varied faces of love.
Walking in one direction, we see a father and his teenage daughter watching a beautiful long-necked swan swimming along the shore of the lake. I suspect she waddled across the boardwalk from the marsh and plunked herself down. It was to be a lake swim today. The father and daughter have their heads bent together, talking quietly. Teenage daughter seems to be concerned about the swan, and her father is offering some words of assurance.
Farther along, a young dad pushes his wee daughter on a swing suspended over the sandy beach. You can tell by her squeals of laughter it is a thrilling ride. Not too high. Just high enough. Dad’s hair is all ruffled in the breeze, and both wear identical expressions of joy.
We walk along to our usual point of turn and see a woman, with an old black lab on one long leash and a feisty young schnauzer on another, heading across the sand and towards the water. We follow behind them and watch as the dogs tramp into the water. The old lab lumbers along in water up to his chest, while the schnauzer — about two feet out — swims with all his might. They make quite the odd couple, a regular canine Felix and Oscar. I guess the old lab’s swimming days are over, but not the doggy joy of the water. Their mistress manages both leashes, smiling indulgently as she picks her way along the rocky shore.
Halfway along our return route, I watch a beautiful couple in their seventies as they sit on a bench looking out over the lake and holding hands. He is tall with golden brown skin. Spare. Elegant. She is rather petite, with that fair Irish skin, and the most beautiful smile that travels from one side of her face to the other. They look so much in love that I simply can’t hide my grin.
We’re almost all the way back now. Coming toward us on the left is a woman lifting her toddler son to her hip. He bounces along secure in his mother’s arms, leans out, and gives me a grin that is sure to charm the socks right off the ladies one day. He is charming me now. He waves his chubby little arm in my direction and gives a very enthusiastic hello.
I laugh. “Hello yourself,” I say.
As we pass, I begin to hear the deep sound of primal drumming. I look around this way and that. Finally, I see a young woman and two men sitting with drums between their feet beating out a sound worthy of the day. The woman is being tutored. She waits. Watches. And then sets her hands to the drum, a look of rapture upon her face.
It is the beginning and ending point of our early evening walk. A walk in which we took delight in the sights and sounds of the water against the shore and witnessed the many faces of love. I am content.
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This post was first written in April of 2008.
I’m thinking about how this post in 2016 would be considered a long post when it wasn’t when it was originally posted. Blogging has changed.
Posts are only too long if they are poorly written. This definitely is not.
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Aw. Thanks so much, Bunty. I’m glad you enjoyed the words.
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I was just thinking the same thing BuntyMcC said. It’s only too long if it’s not worth reading. This is definitely not too long. Brilliant observations. This is a great exercise in writing!
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Thank you so much, Eric. I appreciate your words.
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What a calming post Elen. I loved it.
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Thank you, Laura. I’m happy you enjoyed it.
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I love walking and I enjoyed your story! 🙂
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Thank you so much. Me, too. Me, too.
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Such a soothing talent.
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Why thank you, Gruhn. 🙂
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Brilliant writing, Elen.
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Thank you so much, Jean.
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I love the sunset photo in the boatyard. Your blog reminds me of one of my earlier ones (last spring…I’m just a newbie blogger) about love that I observed. A local meditation instructor used it in a project. ‘Love In a Parking Lot’, about an elderly couple and the theme of ‘observing’ our environment. I think you’d like it, if you just go to my blog and keep scrolling down. But you write a very eloquent one, here. Nice work.
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Thank you so much. Oh, I’m definitely going to be on the hunt for that. Count on it.
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